Dear Mr. Puget, Thank You For Being My Mentor, Now Leave Me Alone Forever

I know you’re reading this, because you’ve been following my writing religiously, waiting for my genius to break through and become apparent to the rest of the world. You’re waiting for me to find my footing, find my voice, find a writing project to throw myself into and make the entire Internet pay attention.

That’s fine. Please, though, stop writing to me.

There’s nothing inappropriate about your letters. They’re chatty and professional, and everyone thinks it’s just so moving and inspiring that the English teacher who nominated me for this fellowship is continuing to follow my work and support me. Fine, yes, you’re a good person—but our time together is over.

I’m sure teachers like you just wait for students like me. Students who don’t just write because they have to, but because they want to. Students who have something to say. Students who aren’t afraid to break the rules. Students who have “a voice.” We make your job worthwhile, and what’s more, we’re your path to immortality. Bob Dylan’s English teacher has never written a book, but his desk has been exhibited in museums across the country. This man recognized genius, we’re told. This man gave young Bobby Zimmerman encouragement, and might just have been instrumental in ensuring that albums like Blonde on Blonde were brought into the world. Thanks, Mr. Rolfzen.

Am I your Bob Dylan? That’s a pretty fucking long shot, but I’m your something. Your only student to go on to any kind of success or recognition as a writer. And I’m only 17—a high school dropout (unless you count Internet school, which I don’t). I have a lot of decades left to win a Pulitzer, or a Nobel, or at least a Minnesota Book Award or something. Someday, it just might happen that I’ll be standing behind a podium and give you a shout-out. You might even be in the room, an invited guest.

Not that you’re only looking for recognition. You’re looking for affirmation that you’re making a difference, that all those papers you’ve graded and detentions you’ve monitored is actually adding up to something—and in terms you can appreciate, not just in terms of students who say thanks and give you a Starbucks gift card at the end of the year. You’re looking for a piece of writing you can point to and say, “Every once in a while…”

You’re doing that already. I see you sharing my shit on Facebook—and in public updates, so all your former students can see, if they for some reason decide to look up your profile when they’re drunkenly reminiscing. You go ahead and do what you do, but you can save your paper and stamps, because I’m not going to read your letters any more—and I never responded in the first place.

Why? Because I hated high school. Because I don’t want to be a stereotype. Because I would have done fine without you. Because a teacher-student relationship is all about the context. I appreciated your encouragement, and obviously I came on this writers’ program, so I think that something good (or at least less-shitty than the alternative) came about as a result of your sticking your neck out for me. Thanks. I’ve said thanks before and there, I’m saying it again. But I’m not looking for a Mr. Chips, or Mr. Holland, or Mr. Robin-Williams-on-a-Desk. I’m looking for someone you’re not, something you don’t have. I don’t have it either, but now it’s time for me to find it on my own.

See you on Facebook, man.


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An Unedited Diary of My Day in Tarrytown

7:10 AM: Woke up. Thought about masturbating. Thought about Lena Dunham obsessively-compulsively masturbating eight times in a row. Jealous if girls can actually do that. Can girls actually do that? She makes it sound terrible, but how could it be? Had a smoke in bed. Masturbated thinking about Spring Breakers, which made me think about Hipster Runoff, which got me thinking about Alice Glass. Had to get back to Spring Breakers to finish. Finished, started watching Tiny Furniture on Netflix.

8:01 AM: That whiny little shit is thumping around already. He’ll be on his iPad in the living room. He doesn’t even bother to use headphones. Didn’t anyone tell him this is a motherfucking writers’ retreat?!

9:32 AM: Finished watching Tiny Furniture, went down for breakfast. Danny makes the best over-easy eggs—one clean swipe of the spatula, and BOOM. He says he learned it at a ranch in Nevada where he stayed with his lover Molly Ann and her crystals. “Those crystals gave her some energy, man, you hear what I’m sayin’?”

10:05 AM: It occurred to me that someone would probably give me a book contract if I came up with something while I’m here. Brainstormed book ideas: premature memoir, book club book, fantasy adventure for tweens. Thought of Jenni’s kid, filled with hatred of tweens. Gave up on book ideas.

11:38 AM: Asked Tanner if he could get me a fake so I could drink in town. He replied (a) no, (b) why would I want to go into town and drink when I can drink here for way cheaper, and (c) everybody in town knows about the teenage prodigy staying at the house on the lake, so I wouldn’t be apt to pass for 21. Shit.

12:30 PM: Went to Tate’s room, told her I’m bored. She said (again) that it was my decision to come out here, and pointed out how much I’d hated school. She asked if I’d done my Internet school stuff yet. I said no, asked what she was doing. She said she’s thinking about getting back to her novella. I said that sounded great. I said it in a sarcastic way.

1:00 PM: Started my Internet school stuff.

1:17 PM: Finished my Internet school stuff. Took a nap.

2:47 PM: Looked out the window and saw Jenni come back from her run, sweaty in spandex. Masturbated.

3:33 PM: Went downstairs for lunch. Ate a bag of Goldfish that I knew were meant for the kid.

4:07 PM: Let Lou teach me how to play cribbage. Spiked my Mountain Dew. He had no clue.

5:45 PM: Barb asked me to help make dinner, so I chopped shit for soup. Continued drinking Mountain Dew and gin.

6:13 PM: Drunk. Picked up Catcher in the Rye, felt like a stereotype, put it down. Started watching something on Netflix, felt like a stereotype, turned it off. Kept drinking, felt like a stereotype, kept drinking.

7:34 PM: Family dinner. Jenni asked if I’d been drinking, Bets said “obviously not” and went back to her soup.

8:16 PM: Pretended to pass out on the couch, listened to Tanner and Tate talking about ye olde times. Lucy showed up and sat on me. I threw up a little in my mouth, and Tate said she was going to go work on her novella. Tanner and Lucy decided to go to the bar and let locals try to pick them up.

9:53 PM: Decided to do some Internet school stuff before I got too sober.

10:40 PM: Tate came to check on me, saw me doing Internet school stuff, was impressed. “Whatever it takes,” she said.

11:58 PM: Went outside for a walk. Thought I heard something in the trees, came back. Fucking nature.

12:23 PM: Lucy and Tanner came back, and I followed them out to the place where Leah and Lindsay were staying. Leah and Lindsay had pot. We smoked it. “When you gonna start chipping in for the stash, little bro?” asked Lindsay. “When you stop calling me little bro,” I said. Everyone laughed.

1:44 AM: Lucy put on Justin Timberlake and we had a three-minute dance party, until Lindsay turned it off. “Sorry, I just can’t do that corporate shit,” he said. “Fuck you,” I said. Everyone laughed.

2:09 AM: Thought of Leah’s cornrows. Masturbated. Fell asleep.


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I Am the Greatest Writer in the World

If you have any sense of what constitutes literary merit, it’s already obvious to you that I’m the greatest writer in the world.

I strike the perfect balance between irony and sincerity, between justified confidence and  sly self-deprecation.

My sentences typically begin with virile, compelling pronouns, but I’m not afraid to lead with a preposition when my testicles tell me to. I also end sentences with prepositions when I fucking choose to.

I don’t need to use obscenity to have an impact, but sometimes I choose to swear because I know it makes you wet.

I’m young, and in writing as in all other endeavors, one can never be too young. You’re insecure about how much younger than you I am, given how blithely I’m shitting this out.

The fact that I’m willing to shit stuff out is part of what makes me such a great writer. The more I write, the greater the chances that I’ll write something truly great, and I will forever after be judged for that. You’ll wait your entire life to publish a novel, and if it’s not truly great, you’ll have missed the one chance you allowed yourself.

Thanks to the quality of my writing—helped by my compelling personal story—I’ve been awarded a lucrative fellowship. I’ve actually been on this fellowship for several months, but all the money was going to my bloodsucking foster parents. On October 4 I’ll turn 18, and then I’ll be given a check that will allow me to do whatever I want with the next year of my life.

This year, I’ll live in a house in rural Minnesota with three other writers. I expect they’ll give me what I want, because they’ll want to stay in my favor. After all, I am the greatest writer in the world—and like all great writers, I desperately want to be drunk.


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A Strange Courtship

She posted a selfie every day or two. Sometimes in her school outfit (“I feel kinda cute today”), sometimes a lipstick pic, sometimes just a headshot (“IDK”), sometimes, when she wanted to be provocative, a shot of herself semi-obscured by sheets or a towel. She had 82 followers.

Her first anonymous ask was a compliment. “I just want to say that you are really hot.” She grinned, blushed, and replied, “: – ) aw thanks.”

Weeks passed before there was another anonymous ask. Her message notification lit up regularly with asks from Jodie, so she wasn’t surprised until she clicked on the envelope and saw an ask from an anon. “quit posting pics of urself. u are rly heinous.”

She just sat there for a few minutes, staring at it. Who was it? She looked through her follower list—there were a couple dozen she didn’t know, but none looked too skeezy. Was it a kid from school? Someone from band? A random troll?

She responded, choosing her words carefully. “Feel free to unfollow any time, anon.” She considered using “bro” instead of “anon” to sound more flippant, but it might not be a guy, and saying “anon” emphasized her critic’s cowardliness.

Jodie chatted her about it right away. They ran through various theories, but none seemed especially plausible. They were still chatting when the second ask came in.

“u r so vain. ur in love with urself. u don’t even know how bad u look.”

Jodie told her not to respond, so she didn’t. Eventually she went to bed, and laid there looking across her dark room at the slowly pulsing light from her sleeping laptop. It was like the anon was there, in her room, sneering at her. She knew the ask was still in her box, and she imagined the anon refreshing a dashboard, watching for her response.

She got up and woke her laptop. Rubbing her eyes, she typed a response.

“why are you doing this? don’t you have anything better to do than say mean things?”

She posted it, closed her laptop, and went back to bed. She laid awake for hours, resisting the urge to check her ask box. Finally, after 3:00, she reached for her iPad. No response. Finally she fell asleep.

There was no response the next morning either, or all day long—she checked on her phone between every class period. She went to band practice, got McDonald’s with Jodie, and did homework while watching Parks and Recreation. Before she went to bed, she checked one last time, and there it was.

“just die. u should just be dead.”

Her heart raced as she clicked answer.

On “Humping”

The 1968 unabridged Webster’s dictionary doesn’t indicate any sexual connotations for the word “hump.” The two senses of “hump” as a verb are (1) to cause to assume the shape of a hump and (2) to exert oneself (slang). In 1968, if you were in a proper crowd, you could walk up to someone and propose humping and they might assume you meant racquetball.

“Hump” sounds like the most sophisticated of retches, like Henry Higgins regretting a highball. Sometimes speed bumps are called “speed humps,” and that’s cute. “Humpty” is a sexy dance and a risky egg.

“Humping” is the word you use when you want to call attention to the comical repeated movement of intercourse. In Annie Hall, Woody Allen proposes to Annie that the two of them get intimate in a spare bedroom at a party. “It’ll be great,” he says, “because while all those Ph.D.s will be in there talking about modes of alienation, we’ll be in here quietly humping.” It wouldn’t be funny if they were “making love.”

Why would you want to “make love” when you can “hump”? The latter sounds more likely to lead to mutual orgasm. “Humping” is probably the best I can hope for when I lose my virginity.

Animals “hump.” They know where it’s at.


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Why “Teenage Internet Addiction” Is Bullshit

So teenagers today are all supposedly addicted to the Internet; like, we can’t let go of our simultaneous connections to everyone else in the world for even one little minute without being stressed out. What a load of bullshit.

First of all, make your mind up, people who write doomsday magazine articles. You used to complain about kids getting addicted to TV and ignoring everyone else around them. Now that we’re actually connecting with other people, that’s a problem too. Basically, the only thing that would make you happy would be if we just sat around playing cribbage with our grandparents.

Secondly, have the people who are complaining about this ever actually been on the Internet? 99.9% of everything on the Internet sucks, and no one knows that better than those of us who are supposedly addicted to it. Facebook is just our aunts and uncles posting links to annoying political shit. Twitter is everyone trying to be a comedian, and failing. (People complain about Twitter just being about what everyone had for lunch, but no, that’s Instagram.) Tumblr is HOLY SHIT A BEAR FELL OUT OF A TREE LET’S EVERY SINGLE PERSON REBLOG THIS ONE PHOTO ALL DAY. It takes effort to look at this shit, not look away.

Texting? Chatting? Sure, I want to check chat and get my texts. That’s where my friends tell me shit, because I’m sorry, they’re not going to pull on their bonnets and knickers and come trotting over from the next farm because we don’t live on the fucking prairie, we live in a city and it’s 2012. It doesn’t mean I’m “addicted” to my phone, it just means I want to hang out and get laid like EVERY OTHER PERSON IN THE FUCKING HISTORY OF THE WORLD.

Maybe instead of complaining about how we’re all addicted to the Internet, adults need to take a good hard look at the alternative. The vast majority of the time, kids are bored—so bored that even watching the same bear fall out of the same tree a billion times is better than listening to our dads tell the story again about the smelly kid on his high school football team. You want to know what we’re addicted to? I’ll give you a hint: it’s not the Internet.


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I Never Listen to Music

Music doesn’t solve your problems—it only makes them worse.

Music costs your money, or puts you at risk of being sued for illegal downloading.

Music is a distraction from real life.

Music is the name of a terrible album by Madonna.

Music is the last name of some people who ought to change their last name because, seriously?

Music is all the same. Note, note, note, note, chord, note, whatever.

Music makes you self-conscious about whether you listen to cool music.

Music is something asswads cross-post to Facebook from apps with twee little names like Rdio.

Music doesn’t speak to you. It’s just ones and zeroes.

Music is not poetry. It’s just whatever someone thinks will make someone else want to fuck.

On Satan

Satan is in my toaster. When my toast gets stuck…why would my toast get stuck? I’m being tested. Out, Satan! Leggo my Eggo!

Satan is on the bus. Why won’t the meter take my dollar? It’s legal money. It was fairly earned. Satan is hiding in the meter, twisting and folding the edges of my paper currency to fill my soul with hatred and doubt.

Satan is in the drugs that caused my parents to neglect me and ultimately be taken from them by Hennepin County Social Services. At least, that’s what They told me, and why would They lie?

Satan pushed my foster mom’s Hummel figure off the shelf when I slammed the door last night. Can’t blame him for that.

Satan’s in the apples that are slowly rotting in the produce drawer. Satan’s in my rusty bike chain. Satan’s in my itchy finger that wants to click Like every time someone uses the Number of the Beast in an image macro. Satan is the gap in Steve Roggenbuck’s teeth, the blur in Marie Calloway’s naked screencaps.

Satan is an upside-down cross, which is a dagger, which is power, which is truth, which is light, which is lit, which is what they’re paying me for. But then, why won’t the meter take my dollar? Theology is confusing.

Should I surrender to Satan? Would that make my breakfast more complete? Get behind me, Dark Prince, and do your damnedest.

A Grandiloquent Pronouncement

There comes a time in the affairs of men when the reins are passed, the baton is slipped, the crown is proffered. At such times, the humble and the innocent must needs screw their courage to the sticking place and assume the mantle of grave concerns.

Such is the crossroads at which we now find ourselves with respect to this noble publication being transmitted to you via the World Wide Web. For a staggering sum, my duly appointed guardians have granted permission for my writings to be published on this mysterious site, the URL of which they know not.

What shall I write here? I have no fucking idea, but you may be assured that it will be constantly worthy of your valuable attention, for I have been deemed a genius, a Relevant Teen Prodigy with unlimited potential just so long as I am nurtured and kept from getting into drugs or whatever, given this publication’s highly problematic history with substance abuse.

My shepherd on these fair shores is one Tate Morrissey, a responsible young ginger who has been employed these several weeks to sit in the back of a classroom after school each day and, if nothing else (actually, in fact, nothing else) confirm that I do truly exist. This she has confirmed, and will continue to confirm, until such time as my fellowship support ceases on June 1, 2013. Unless, of course, I cease to exist, a circumstance of which she will doubtless inform you.

Therefore, I hereby do state, declare, and put into force this One Great Truth:

Unreality House is mine, bitches.


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